Her sentence: It landed right on the front stoop, the delivery version of a perfect ten.
From Along for the Ride by Sarah Dessen.
The subordinate clause at the end of the sentence refers not to a single word in the sentence, but to the entire action described by the sentence.
My sentence: The band fell apart in the middle of our showcase, the epitome of my worst nightmares.
Thursday, October 8, 2009
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