Thursday, October 8, 2009

Sentence 5

Her sentence: It landed right on the front stoop, the delivery version of a perfect ten.

From Along for the Ride by Sarah Dessen.

The subordinate clause at the end of the sentence refers not to a single word in the sentence, but to the entire action described by the sentence.

My sentence: The band fell apart in the middle of our showcase, the epitome of my worst nightmares.

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